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Wounded |
This is a song I wrote 3 years ago but recently got to record it. Its still work-in-progress but would like to get some feedback. Thanks in advance for listening.
Be well.
AOB
Be well.
AOB
A well composed title. Solo Guitar sounds a bit strange and lost in there. But all in all a song that must be played over a radio station. Goog job!
I really like this song a lot. The bass is good, albeit slightly repetitive, as are the drums. The lyrics sound really nice with bass and drums. I like the chorus a lot also, but it seems like the drums should be doing something else there. The guitar solo is pretty good, but it could use some sprucing up, ie try playing off beat or something a little more complicated. Otherwise, very well put together. Good job.
interesting stuff. The verse melody got a bit repetetive but overall I liked it!
XenosX suggestion is good |
Thanks XenosX, thats a good suggestion, I had the same thoughts too, will try to do more on that end.
Hot Dang!! Mind blowing! |
Just brilliant! What else can I say.
This is some hot stuff, I would like to hear this on the radio too as TritonKeyboarder mentioned, perhaps with a more aggressive lead guitar, that would make this song perfect. Defintely one of the best songs on Bandamp I've heard so far. Congrats!!! I give you an "Excellent" rating for this one. I want more!

Nirvanesque |
I dunno if it makes any sense but this is almost Nirvanaesque in its style with the accoustic and distorted guitar mix and the vocals modifier, but at the same time it takes its own direction with the guitar solo section which overall makes it a very unique style and one that you could easily develop as your own I believe. Really nice recording quality too.
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