Thought I'd post an old one while me and the band are working on some new stuff! I came across this one just now while browsing through my old YouTube videos... it's probably the most raw emotional song I've wrote, it's really personal. The girl it's about was someone I liked who helped me out after my ex cheated on me. She kinda led me on. I don't think she even knows it's about her haha.

Here's the video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vVgIHUmVaB0

I really really like your vocals on this track!  I'd say you totally re-record this with the band and you got a hit!

Often difficult to replicate raw emotion, but you can do it be reliving the moment over and over again until you feel the same emotion.
It's a bit long as it stands, but as UndercoverApple suggested, you can vary the music with your band.
Great potential if you can support the emotion with an arrangement to match.

Very cool. Very soulful performance. The track could do with a re-record with the band as was suggested by others but the foundation is clearly there and I wouldn't be surprised if it turned out to be a quite powerful ballad. Nice job.