Duuuuuh, I uploaded an old version before.

There you go now. Still lacking the vocals but I'll try to work on them soon.

Cheers.

           > Iz

Very cool intro...Man you have some awesome progressive compositional skills...Always feel I'm dragging behind when I listen to your music..Awesome job Iz!

As I said before and second M's praise on the intro being fantastic.
Your arrangements are great, so much going on.
My only critique is the drums, too much bass EQ.
Good work.

Brilliant waaaaaaaaaaa the gods of progressive rock smile .BTW all our very best to you and family for xmas & new year  & any time you want to come to Oz again please stay with us

 
 hugs greg & Yoko
   

Thank you guys. I'll fix the Eq, Denis; I agree about that.

I wish you all a great end of the year.

          > Iz

First of all : I´m pleased seeing you back here, Iz.

There´s so many influences progressed in here, wooooaah
Zappa, Gentle giant, Brand X, Genesis, Yes, Gong and many more "fingerprints" I can detect.
Don´t have any tips or so except the mentioned EQ issue. I know this is a first basic sketch. Am just courious how it will go on.

Looking forward.........................

Absolutely excellent
You construct and you produce , it's like all the good bits rolled into one
Well said Denis , it has 'fingerprints' of great bands .... but to be honest , and excuse the pun ....
But I dont think they can touch this .... !

waiting in anticipation for vocals and final cut .....