Igor and I just finished this song about... 20 minutes ago, so I thought I'd share it with you guys and gals.

noone reviewed so far? Interesting!

...like this song. Interesting intro and use of vocal layers, great ending!

Yeah, go figure. I was thinking maybe I just wouldn't post any more electronic music on BA.

Thanks for the kind words though, Triton. Cheers!

sorry about keep comparing you with LP but it really sounds liks LP's newer stuff  to me haha.

At first I liked the intro but it lacks a contrast or a build up in dynamics/rhythm. I hear some downs but it need more ups imo. At least to differentiate between verse and chorus.

No problems with that comparison JieXian. I like LP for the most part (all except for the lyrics, which I think are often pretty simplistic).

This is a very different intro than the song started with. We went back and forth about it. Igor wanted this one (quieter start) and I wanted the more driving one. But... compromise is okay.

Thanks though for the feedback.

Oh incase you misunderstood me I meant that I liked the intro but for the rest of the song the backing lacks some more upbeat dynamics, maybe to differentiate between different sections?

love the combo of guitars and electro beats and effects (yeah I enjoy NIN for that same reason) so this tune fits my ears very nicely

I feel that this is just the first part of a longer tune... When this ends, it just screams to burst open in a cyber-metal mayhem groove to ignite the mosh pit, you know, get the transpiration going - crack some ribs

The intensity needs to discharge. Good stuff so far

Wow this is awesome, love the change at 1:18.

Does remind me a lot of NIN.

The intro made me expect some really deep/low vocals and then when the singing starts I was a bit thrown back and then as it kept going I just loved it.

The ending is really good too with the harmonies.

Dude you really know what you're doing, good stuff

In contrast to some earlier comments I actually really like that it doesn't change too much, I think it's too predictable to have a big heavy metal riff at the end. Keep it how it is imo

I love ya style, Bri, no matter if you come across with "electronic stuff" like thisone, or your rocksongs or whatever. So, please don´t stop posting your stuff. Its music with its own label, its own character. Just unique. It´s you. You guys have great innovative ideas and you realize 'em soooo well.

Keep it up
U.L.I.