Gonna be re-doing this one with a little less Jim morrison in there...

this about the ppl who brave the croud in the Jack? wtg m8

Not bad there mate. I like the sounds especially from the keyboard. The recording is excellent. One thing that I think is letting you down could be the lack of dynamics and a a fairly repetitive drum beat. Vocals tend to get a bit lost behind the reverb in sections. Try to emphasize the key changes into the chorus and stuff like that, make them a point of interest. Keep it up champ!

Interesting - I actually liked this tune better than Kaleidoscope, the one you enterred for June.  That one struck me very similar to Bruce Springstein, while I think you did well with adopting this one to sound more like the Doors, who I am very much a fan of.  Good work.  Your recording quality is pretty good over all, but I do agree with a lot of things stavros said.  Loved the ending.  Rock on man!

nice job man, very profesional, not my style, but te song is pretty good! keep o Dooring, lol!

I agree with all of the above, And I dig it a lot, love the doors, and you do need a bit more of Jack  , just joking

Cheers

Rod

Nice job, man.  You've captured the Doors meets the Eels in this one.  I like it.

Marg

The only Doors song I know is 'People Are Strange'  I made a point of avoiding their stuff...
I really quite like this tho
well done

Never heard Doors, but a cool song anyhoo . I rekon the beginning bit would make a great ska song! Try it someday 

I'd say you definately managed to capture the Doors feeling on this track! It's not bad, but I think the drums let it down a bit. Writing drum patterns can be a pain in the arse escpecially when all you want to do is get down to buisness with other instruments (at least, I always found that), but I think that at the end of the day it makes a difference.