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Flyer_____Lyric's/Vocals

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A Picture On My Wall,That's All
 
Verse 1
I've been paying the bills
for the holes
you've been digging
catching trains to get to work
there has to be a better way
theres plenty to write about
in your diary about our yesterdays
you better get it straight baby
 
Verse 2
the clock on your wall
doesnt keep time at all
its a different day
but not for you
I know
you've been calling me
why do you keep knocking
on my door
have you picked your life up
off the floor
baby Im
Greyhound 
Greyhound  bound

chorus
and the last thing
I heard her say
oh,where you going
but baby
oh,your nothing more then
a picture on my wall

Verse 3
But,
I found a better payday
all the dead presidents I saved
dont have a chance
of coming close
to your hands 
have you picked
your life up off the floor
why the hell are you still
knocking on my
Baby I went,
I went
Greyhound bound 
 
 chorus
and the last thing
I heard her say
oh,where you going
but baby
oh,your nothing more then
a picture on my wall

Lead Guitar

End
and the last thing
I heard her say
oh,where you going
but baby
oh,your nothing more then
a picture on my wall

Yep That's all



Schubbi_Guitar/Composition
Flyer___Lyrics/Vocals

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I've been looking through all your songs. They're all great. Keep up the good work mate.

Hmm ..

Thanks Uthrized.....

Dont know  what to make of you comment inuke....thanks

Flyer

I have listened to 3 of your songs tonight man i liek them all....the vocals are generally alittle out front  but it still sounds cool.I liek the mood of your songs man...you can't beat lonely feeling songs!!!The guitar sounds cool..is that an amp or amp sim?

Yey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I like this!!!!!!Good stuff Flyer rocking out my friend!!!!Yeah I remember this song is a great one!!!!

Thanks  rdobson...I appreciate your support

Thanks Marino..for your comment buddy

Flyer

MAD
the levels are to hell         l!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and back say it as i hear it..........
voice is ok but not compressed.........in the loud bits
so volume levels are all over the plaice!!!!!!!!! and that is a fish
its very crude................. all round
needs a remix
compression is your next step flyer?????????
it evens out the input
ok
talk to master mixer for the song.............u?
the fish
could be great but it aint comin together as a mix

Would you like to remix it for me Fish ?

I like this one Flyer - good construction, and good instumental choices by Schubbi, and a very nicely delivered vocal line on top.
I can see what the fishman is talking about here - I'm not sure that I'd call it a "crude" mix, but it would benefit from being lifted somewhat in places.  And yes, some individual track compression would certainly help. Also, it seems a little quiet, did you normalize the final mix?
But like I said, despite the mixing issues (which can be resolved) the actual song is good.