Hey guys/girls!

A song i've been working on.. it's a bit reggae based...

My question to you is if you can find some good lyrics and vocal melody on this
(yes that's always my problem :()

I hope some of you can help me out with this!

Greetings!
Bob

rock steady.........
DOWN LOADED IT
making out beat .... listened 30+ times ...haha.. thank u!!!!!!!!
sunday never the same
i'm exhausted!!!


haha THE fish

nice job wiz!!!
Very crisp production....
Some minor issues(Drums need a bit of humanization and that secondary snare cut through real sharp,maybe drop the level a bit)!!!
The composition is real well put together!
Yea many nice details here!
Good show!

Wow, great job! It sounds a lot like the early Sublime dubs (Robbin' the Hood).

I have to agree with Marino though on the percussion. Reggae and rocksteady songs usually have very notable and lively drums, but these sound too much like a machine.

I do love the bass riffs though. Great job on that.

The song ends pretty abruptly, no?

Im liking the bass line alot. I dont think i can provide any criticmisms because its not one of my prefered genres. My experience of reggae doesn't go much further than Bob Marley. I really like the piano that comes in later in the song. I think i'd like to hear that sooner in the song as a more dominant element.

I agree about it ending a bit suddenly but thats easily fixed.

Nice song.. has lots of potential. good luck with the collab

Ian

Pass the Dutchie mon!!!

    Seriously cool island vibes...  must agree with Marino on drums man... that is my ONLY issue...  The rest is FANTASTIC!!  YEAH!!!!  I might have to try my hand at this one.... shoot... I wish I could sing... damn...

           Seriously Wis, AWESOME JOB MAN!

                  JimK

um....  I added some vox to your song.... and umm.... well..... Sorry dude.....

  https://forum.bandamp.org/Audio_Review/6267.html

Vey nice Wisdom...A very relaxing and a easy to listen to tune...Very good recording also...Overall a real decent job here...Oh, The intro is really nice also, Bob

Flyer

Rates

I would like to finish this piece of work since it has been lost and forgotten/.
 I think it has potential to become a really relaxing flow reggae song


Can anyone help me with lyrics or a vocal melody ?????????????

Thanks!!!
Bob

I've had a quick attempt at some lyrics - feel free to hack/adapt them any way you want.

https://forum.bandamp.org/Lyrics_Review/34318.html