#1October 2nd, 2007 · 01:01 PM
113 threads / 58 songs
464 posts
Nepal
vincentL
birds and bees blues 2.0
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birds and bees blues 2.0
A more "produced" version
I'm not totally happy but that's a step forward for me
#2October 2nd, 2007 · 01:09 PM
113 threads / 58 songs
464 posts
Nepal
poor shaker playing and guitar solo I'm afraid!
#3October 2nd, 2007 · 03:34 PM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
The shaker works, but it's not enough---how about a tambourine, bongos, plastic garbage cans (hey, if it's good enough for John Bonham then it's good enough for the rest of us, right?), etc. etc.?

The guitar works for me.  It could be a little cleaner, but I love how deceptively simple it is.  And of course, I think you voice really suits this song.

The guitar solo was a bit of a surprise; I wasn't expecting something so bluesy, but hey, it sounds great.  Very BB King, I liked it.

Good stuff...but you already know how much I love this track.
#4October 2nd, 2007 · 08:47 PM
8 threads / 7 songs
83 posts
Venezuela
I really like this song, i'll give a shot and cover it, but just the backtrack without guitar (i don't play guitar), so maybe one you guys record the voice later and guitar over it.
#5October 2nd, 2007 · 09:49 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
327 posts
United Kingdom
i like this
straight away I liked it... hey your voice is really good.x...x..you know how to drop those notes right in..x
#6October 4th, 2007 · 05:36 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,399 posts
United Kingdom
Nice song

The melody vox go well with the guitar progression,

How about some vox harmony ah's.

Sounds great as it is though

Denis
#7October 5th, 2007 · 08:57 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Funny, I was sure that I'd posted on this one already!

Anyhow.... it's a great sounding song Vincent.  I like the accented vocal delivery; the guitar playing is pretty good too, it's a simple guitar line that works very well.

Good lyrics, nice construction to the song overall, clean and clear recording.  This one works well for me.

If I were to do anything else I'd add a subtle bass line, some drums, and one extra vocal harmonising on just a couple of lines.

But this is damn good stuff again from you.
#8October 6th, 2007 · 03:28 PM
2 threads / 1 songs
5 posts
United Kingdom
I like this nice bluesey sound, reminds me of Married with children the Oasis song.  I think the shaker is nice,  maybe could alternate with some sort of fill at transitional parts of the song.    The solo is perfect and is nice in the mix.  I think the song  might be slightly too long also a nice little outro  with some lead guitar would suit this just like the aforementioned Oasis song.
#9October 11th, 2007 · 03:57 PM
113 threads / 58 songs
464 posts
Nepal
I agree with the lengh of the song I think I did a verse too many
I don't know the song you're talking about but I might give it a listen
as for the outro that might be a good idea I will look into it
Hopefully I will get my guitarist to put a decent solo on that track( he's so much better than me!)
#10October 19th, 2007 · 02:11 PM
113 threads / 58 songs
464 posts
Nepal
bring it on!
the song is in the next battle
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