Punk Rock Emo

:: Incredible spring ::

Let's go to your coral reef
I would like to breathe under the water

You are in your underwater world
I expecting you in mine

A so impossible union and
And you... mi incredible girl

The pain is invisible

No one could find us hidden under the calm sea

The waves that strike.
So much foam spouts
spreading my dreams all over the sand

Return to your house
This is not like your home

We will see us again the next spring
I will speak very softly at your ear while the tide rises
and you disappear

My incredible spring


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plain....all i have to say is plain. potential.keep going.

adjust the mix a bit.  Vocals are overpowering.

Balance the volumes and play it loud!

Good punk tune. Listen to it CRANKED if you're going to listen. This kind of stuff sounds best LOUD!!! That's why you don't hear it in elevators.

sounds good to me, like the overall sound of the song as well as the arrangement.

Good for the genre, which I'm not particularly into. But pretty standard stuff. Good work though!

rusty, if you have nothing good to say, simply say nothing. Pasando hambre buen punk, nesecitan mas punch en la grabacion, y mas brillo, pero definitivamente, buena musica! keep it up! 

Very fitting punk tune for an increible primavera.  Dig the vocals as well!  Good work.

I'm generally not a punk fan but this is pretty awsome! I'm deffinately putting this on my play list! Good work guys and keep it up,
joey