This is another song I had just hanging around, so it might as well hang around here!

This was recorded in Jims front room in Leiden again and like all the other songs we did together this is also a 'one take' recording with his little 4-track.

The lyrics.......

Freely

Did I ever tell you?
Of the things I had in mind
Did they ever tell you?
Of the times you left behind
Did she ever try and sell you
Magic so untouchable
Well you gave
Freely

Did you ever realize?
The looking in my eyes
Was it a surprise?
The thunder of our skies
Will it ever dawn?
That times been here all along
Must the fighting go on?
For we are here
Freely

One day I'll stop looking for one day
Any moment now it will be all right
Some time in time to come
It will be done
Some time deep in the night
You will see
You should have loved her
Freely

Could you really love her?
She says, see I love you
Freely
And you gave your hart and soul
Why do I love the things you do to me?
Set me free

Did I ever tell you?
That the world is one
Did you ever realize?
That you don't until it's gone
And the earth keeps on moving
Beneath out very feet
Moving on and on
On and on and on
Freely

The spirit moves in the captivation of your soul
Freely
And you are the very hart of it all
Set me free


Again thanks for the comments, it's always wonderful to know what this little group of critiques think!

Dude, this is great! strong on the feeling it delivers.  Complex emotions on a simple structure, that's what i usually call a good song 
The recording is not very good tho...

oh, and I'm one of those who like to understad hehe. can you post the lyrics?

needs a de-esser, mix needs a little work in the beginning as I can only barely make out the rhythm underneath the song.

I like the passion you put into your vocals though. good show.

Great Job bro...
 guitar work is killer!!  Your voice is super..
you should your abilities here!! keep it up
bro!

Bluey

Thanks for the reviews guys, I uploaded and went to bed!
Well the lyrics are up there!
The recording, from 15 year old cassette to digital so I'm actually quite pleased with it!

Blue : Killa Guitar ? try http://www.laliya.com/   , James Mcguire a real magician!
"you should your abilities here"  ??? I don't understand?

should = showed....  (damn rented fingers)



 



Blessings,

Bluey

Cool! Thanks
Blessed Be! 

went through the sound bites on the james
mcguire website.. he's fekkin awesome, no
doubt.. but I didn't hear any wailing guitar
leeds anywhere.. some great guitar parts
and stringed parts that I was unable to
identify..  one I think may have been
a balalikia, but couldn't swear to that with
out witnessing it.. cause it could have been
a keyboard sound module part.. but
never the less from what I heard, that
dude and his music is truly fekkin
awesome!!!!  and you have another good
point you made, even if you didn't say it
out loud..  that is neither one of us are any
where near that level yet.. you'll be there soon
at this rate.. me, well who knows with an
old lamed up dog... but one can hope...

blessed be,

Blue

Great guitar sound. A little too much delay on the voice. A bit of hiss. Like your voice. Really like how it picks up towards the end. Great for being recorded in such a way.

Another hit Kings.The guitar playing is really good.The guy has great dynamics.Your vox feel and touch are top notch.Forget about the quality of the recording this is just a great song!!Super vote! 95.23%