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The title is quite dirty my friend.
So is this song about sex?
I like it alot.
So is this song about sex?
I like it alot.
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JackofHearts wrote…
The title is quite dirty my friend.
So is this song about sex?
I like it alot.
Howdy Denis,
hm.... I can see you r expecting some proper advice on what to do with this song...
To tell you the truth, I like as it is, believe it or not.
I'd add a piano track maybe and posibly rerecord it to get rig of the noise. nevertheless, it sounds real nice.
You need to make it a bit more interesting and quit repeating the same musical phrase for three minutes.
You need some sort of change there. At about 2 minutes in it makes you want to skip to the next track, if it was a CD this song was on.
It's a great great strating point for a light-hearted song. But there has to be some more in it. Hope you know what i mean. And I mean it when I say I like it. This could make a fantastic song but now it's only a well-recorded idea IMO.
I want to hear it done properly, please
Jim
hm.... I can see you r expecting some proper advice on what to do with this song...
To tell you the truth, I like as it is, believe it or not.
I'd add a piano track maybe and posibly rerecord it to get rig of the noise. nevertheless, it sounds real nice.
You need to make it a bit more interesting and quit repeating the same musical phrase for three minutes.
You need some sort of change there. At about 2 minutes in it makes you want to skip to the next track, if it was a CD this song was on.
It's a great great strating point for a light-hearted song. But there has to be some more in it. Hope you know what i mean. And I mean it when I say I like it. This could make a fantastic song but now it's only a well-recorded idea IMO.
I want to hear it done properly, please
Jim
JBP wrote…
Howdy Denis,
hm.... I can see you r expecting some proper advice on what to do with this song...
To tell you the truth, I like as it is, believe it or not.
I'd add a piano track maybe and posibly rerecord it to get rig of the noise. nevertheless, it sounds real nice.
You need to make it a bit more interesting and quit repeating the same musical phrase for three minutes.
You need some sort of change there. At about 2 minutes in it makes you want to skip to the next track, if it was a CD this song was on.
It's a great great strating point for a light-hearted song. But there has to be some more in it. Hope you know what i mean. And I mean it when I say I like it. This could make a fantastic song but now it's only a well-recorded idea IMO.
I want to hear it done properly, please
Jim
I think a change 2 minutes in is a good idea. I want to do the lead guitar again and just play in the gaps.
More advice like this please
Thanx
krj wrote…
i love the bongos.
not really a fan of the effect on the lead, but that might just be my taste.
Thnx for your nice comment on the bongos, I borrowed them from a fiend and I love playing them. I too wanted to play the lead guitar again not so much for the sound, although I think if it had a stereo effect may sound better. To tell you the truth I don't like effects normally and will probably record the lead straight, with a little reverb.
Denis
...And we thought this might have something to do with kitchen spices! Very ' Vervesh ' , The 'Cumin Over ' would sound cool just one...every 8 bar with loads of delay / echo ...swooshing around with pan....could throw some joanna on this for ya...see what you think....redo the guitar to a click track and post it...got an idea of what your looking for....cool.
hal9000 wrote…
...And we thought this might have something to do with kitchen spices! Very ' Vervesh ' , The 'Cumin Over ' would sound cool just one...every 8 bar with loads of delay / echo ...swooshing around with pan....could throw some joanna on this for ya...see what you think....redo the guitar to a click track and post it...got an idea of what your looking for....cool.
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