A collaboration between Geo and my self.
Geo had a song up I got carried away with it and ended up recording where I went!
I think Geo heard the vocal differently placed, and I know they are too loud, I just wanted to know what this little critical group thought!

Great lirics and voice.Music arrangement is awsome!

this is crying for a heavy section! to me it seems like it keeps building up and then just starts over again, theres never that climax that I love and always look for   Voice sounds great, instrumentation as well...


*edit* over the mountain....at the end of that where it sustains should be where a distorted guitar comes in, it will sustain then go into the same riff thats in the " over the mountain " part but in the style of "shredding".....also that riff reminds me a bit of Zeppelin's Kashmir....

that climax BC is talkin about would be great to me too, full drums and fat guitar to bring it to the end
but it is very enjoyable now as it is, very nice riff, very good vox,
quite a fancy collab again 

Well yeah, your vocals are "overbearing" maybe, but in a way it works. You are a vocalist mainly, and to you vocals and lyrics matter most. I'm getting a swingy jazzy feel from this (even though the music is not swingy jazzy!) gets me in a similar mood as I have when walking through a city at daytime, bright sunshine in my face, just going from a to b, watching people, thinking about ladies and the good stuff, making eye contact all around, more dancing than walking, mainly... Feels like a regular day, any day of the week I like it a lot, no need to turn the vocals down IMO!

Well, I dont hear the Jazzy riff to this...This is pretty good..Nice vocals...good lyrics..as I would have expected comming from the King man..nice music flow....easy and free..Nice collaboration you guys

I like


Flyer

too much fx to the guitar. drums too low on volume.

but a good collab thing.

great voice and mood

Ha! That's the way to enjoy your day in the city!

Thanks to all for listening and commenting.
I can but say that the music track is Geos excellent work, I've simply tried to blend a vocal to his work.
And as the lyric goes : "Now it's over to you....." If any one feels the urge to put some "shredding" into this then feel free! It's what it's all about! is it not? I can always tone down the vocal if necessary!
I also hear a next step to the music but I do the lyrics,.....so....!  

Something else : I've just bought a 37 piece Encyclopedia Britannica for 150euros, the set is complete and all the books are in good condition! There's 3 banana boxes full of them for gods sake, I'm never going to read them all but I'm dead chuffed just the same!

You did a good job on this. I  love the sound of your voice with the effects the mix is pretty good really, since your voice is real good it's not to far out in front that it is overbearing the music.

Sounds real good I like the melody line you put in it
Geo did a bang up job on the mix with the music.  I love that break with the descending chords. I'm kinda with the earlier post that another part in the song would really kinda bring the whole thing together.

great job.

gets  high vote.