My first entry here, and one of my favorite tunes... all synth and yet unfinished - I'm surious to see what people think so far.

I meant "curious", not surious.  Blah.

Sounds unreal...to mechanical...If you'd really play those instruments it would sound much better. Good job on those vocals. All in all, sounds ok, but not pro. Add good guitar, good bass and good drums on those vocals. That would rock. Hey, keep rockin' and good luck!

I agree with SpOOnMan. If you re-did this with like an acoustic guitar, some electric riffs, a bass, and if not a real kit, some good loops or well-programmed drums, it would be killer. I like the song a lot, and the vocals are excellent quality. I'll be looking for more.

good pre-production, the vocals are very cool, crazy man! keep it up, definitely agree with Chauvette
PS @ the end reverse the drum loop a tad before "god damn loony", it would sound cool on a reverse x-fade, as if the tape slowed down and started to go backwards 

All sounds a little too tight because its all through your synth... Definatly get some real guitar in there if you're able just to try and loosen it a little because the whole idea is quite cool... Keep it up!

GREAT LYRICS

The truth is, that it really does sound mechanic, the instruments are too artificial. But the vocal line is great, all those multiplication and background-distorted things sound great. The melody is also very nice. Some production work could make this a hit.

Man those vocals are great! Well done! The sounds youve got there are good, but a little mechanical. Good song!

yeah spoon man hit the nail on the head with that review......the background voices sound fake but i am no master on vocals...sounds cool though just make it real