Another try out, this time on the vocals,
I have plenty of comments of my own now, but it came out as it came out, and I'm still happy with it.

I'd love to be able to describe it to you, but maybe the best thing for you to do is to just listen to it.

cool.... like a mix of VNV nation, Dance or Die, and The Young Gods.

sincerely enjoyable!

Nice idea! I like it. And I think that it could be finnished with...bagpipes? I don't know. In my head here would be very interesting with bagpipes:)

Bagpipes?

Bagpipes??????

Ok cool! I like it, or should I say 'I'll think about it'

Did you know - "that some famous person is quoted to have said that the Bagpipes are the one instrument that sound the same before you've learnt how to play them and after you've learnt how to play them"
I heard it on the Weakest Link tonight and now you come up with Bagpipes! 

Thanks very much for the comment as always.

Nice recording Kings...I had a hard time understanding the lyrics when you were singing them  at the begining...then they got more clearer during the song...your doing really good....Ummm  I do stumble over your lyrics though

(Its A little inside joke, people)

Im glad to see when someone as your self joins bandamp with the determination you are showing.....cool

Flyer

For all those 'stumbling' past my door I've posted the lyrics for this song here : https://forum.bandamp.org/Lyrics_Review/38287.html

Seeing as I cant post any more songs, all I can do is give you the words for the songs that I have posted.

nice overall mix, being a drummer, i like interesting drum samples...these are very tasty, simple, but it fits the keyboards and vox

i'd like to hear a huge thumping kick drum when the song really kix in at 1:34

also, i don't think bagpipes are your missing link hahaha.

sounds great, i like to trance out to this stuff

This is really listenable. How 'bout live drums behind this insead of samples, that would be hot. I can't hear the lyrics but i like the vocal anyways.

I would add a sax rather than bagpipes, a tenor sax playing long  bass notes around the melody

well the songs says it.............oh yeahh..........nice song dude keep it up