| Nice |
sweet man! Really nice...for me maybe a little Eq'n....There's no bottom end...or maybe you need a bass line...anyway very nice...This is the first Ive heard from you..weird
"EDIT" Ive listened a few more times now and I have to say I love your voice and the feeling and emotion in it.Very nice delivery.
"EDIT" Ive listened a few more times now and I have to say I love your voice and the feeling and emotion in it.Very nice delivery.
Ooooh, I see some seriouse possibiiltys for this track. Some strings in there. Deep bass strings of some sort and some eq work and this could be an awesome track.
Try playing it on an electric guitar wuth a nice clean sound to it(something warm, deep and consistant) and keep the chord seguence the same but don't just play the chords, feel the music and see what comes out of those notes and chords.
That's what I'd do anyway.
Good luck,
KI
Try playing it on an electric guitar wuth a nice clean sound to it(something warm, deep and consistant) and keep the chord seguence the same but don't just play the chords, feel the music and see what comes out of those notes and chords.
That's what I'd do anyway.
Good luck,
KI
beautiful, i like the mood in the verses and the chorus is lovely. i think the mix should be improved a bit. i totally agree with moses i.e. to keep the chord sequence same. just be in the mood of the song in the bridge, play around and you will be amazed.
once again this is a wonderful song with a lot to it, some more accompaniment will do wonders.
once again this is a wonderful song with a lot to it, some more accompaniment will do wonders.
agreed with the fish man,
you have a good voice, just a little bit out of tune here and there. I bet if you took more time to get your songs down, you'd be able to get it all tightened up.
okay.. well, good luck!
you have a good voice, just a little bit out of tune here and there. I bet if you took more time to get your songs down, you'd be able to get it all tightened up.
okay.. well, good luck!
| you've got the groove on |
You've got my vote for songwriter's draft.
You belt it out well enough.
Would like hear an arrangement with more than a single guitar strumming.
Cool feel. Good emotional delivery. You d'mann.
You belt it out well enough.
Would like hear an arrangement with more than a single guitar strumming.
Cool feel. Good emotional delivery. You d'mann.
| Hmm. |
Yes, this song could really use some strings and stuff.
I'm not to fond of the vocals either, needs some practise, I'm sad to say.
Has a little Neil Young feel...
I'm not to fond of the vocals either, needs some practise, I'm sad to say.
Has a little Neil Young feel...
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