this is a preliminar version for a collaboration project, just bass and voice

Here i'm trying to show the idea of the structure of the song, but it needs a lot of job.

please don't vote this one, i just want to make a test

cheers

Dodo

PS. SwordFish: "This is not a Noodle", lol

weehee, I like the intro loop most definately, and the play between bass/vocal line comes on very wave rock like.

hum, in this I would rather have heard english lyrics, they would mean more to me, but then spanish is your native tongue, so at that it's more logical.

I think something can be made out of this, sure!

Liking that little like at 0:37 on the guitar.  Definatley develop this - once you have the ability to record with distortion and drums I'd love to hear that.  Also add a rhythm guitar for chords.  Has loads of potential.

if you are interested to know the lyrics and the correct translation go to

https://forum.bandamp.org/Lyrics_Review/33656.html

Dodo

ok not anoodle..................work in progress 

could it be a good song

work it

I actually enjoyed it with only a bass and vox.
Good tempo!
Work it on, it'll make a good piece for sure

this has some potential, increase the quality, and the guitar is good

I agree with Taeguk. It definitely has potential. But you'll need to adjust the volumes. Make them near the same volume.

As for vocals. I can't understand a word you said, but if you want to express your emotion with your song, it needs more emphasis. :P I can sort of get what parts are what based upon the tone you chose, but I think it needs a little more emphasis.