um I wrote a drunkard song once... think I now have a reason to upload it.

I think the effect of pitching up and then down, creating that odd modulation stuff is very experimental. but experimental comes out best when in combination with a few really crisp tracks in there. try havin' it with fruity loops for a bit, for some crispy drum patterns and synths. it'll add a lot.

as for the rest I largely go with what JimkDaAdtman said.