songish...bout being a drunk. angry sounding guitar,confused harmonica, loss for words. sorry for bad quality.

well the guitar wasnt so heavy when recorded,but i changed the pitch up and down and liked the sound. not a very practiced or good singer,but at least im aware of it. perserverance, long word that.

I'm sorry, i just listened to this. I'm gonna go jump off my roof... again

um... yeah..

Sorry im so negative, don't let me discourage you. I just can't listen to it right now cuz it's so crude

oh well,sure if you survive your jump,come back agian and it might sound better!
Dont worry, i know im no genius, i just wanted to see if anyone could listen to it, if its not your cup of tea its not your cup of tea.

This works....

   The poor quality actually adds to the emotion, and makes it really get the point across..

 As you said, it's about being a drunk, and the title, today a promise, it is exactly as it feels to be an alchoholic, trying to get past the addiction, and slipping, and sobering, and slipping again..  the frustration, the confusion, the anger... This is actually really cool, whether or not you meant for it to happen, you have created a nice artistic soundscape here....  Kudos my man!

             JimK

Man, this is from another planet... 8-) I mean it sounds so bad to me, that it actually enters another dimension and in that dimension I kinda agree with JimK... 8-)
But let me tell you something - if Bob Dylan recorded this, it would be talked about as artistic masterpiece.

I can't vote on this, but that's all I have to say about it... 8-)

thanks for the nice words.....not really a dylan fan,strange that its a bit like him then.

seriously are you kidding?
what do you expect?
any votes? any comments? thought your last post was bad but this one is more than that.

um I wrote a drunkard song once... think I now have a reason to upload it.

I think the effect of pitching up and then down, creating that odd modulation stuff is very experimental. but experimental comes out best when in combination with a few really crisp tracks in there. try havin' it with fruity loops for a bit, for some crispy drum patterns and synths. it'll add a lot.

as for the rest I largely go with what JimkDaAdtman said.

i dont really expect much from anyone to be honest, mr keyboarder..... im a beginner....isnt that part of the joy of bandamp? that it puts good musician in the position to help, rather than simply criticise?