10 mins to write, 10 mins to record, can u tell lol

quite talented for 10 mins

Very groovy. I recomend about half way through the song before people loose interest you come in with a cick ass distorted White Stripes style version off the riff up the tempo, bring in some drums and bring the roof down with a kick ass blues solo......  but its still very good as it is of course.

Reminds me of Nirvana's About A Girl mixed with Subterranean Homesick Blues. Not nearly as focused as either one, though.

Good tune... Fill it out a bit though, crank it up a notch...

Good work getting all those rhymes cohesive.  Gets a little tired about half way through didn't really keep my interest.  Maybe think about adding some sort of bridge

ok but a little empty sounding....needs more filler to sound full. it'll do... keep pushing forward.

The song is good but you need more power in the vocals.It's a little too bland.

Pretty good I guess. The guitar overpowers your voice and is kind of hard to understand at times. But good lyrics for putting it together in 10 minutes.

aaron, im thinking more REM - End of the world, actually im more than thinking i mean those versus are very similar as in the feel of it. not really a song you can say has much in it but ofcourse that can be easily blamed on the amount of time you have put into it