Here's my try at techno
Hope it's ok....

-NT4M

i loved it. plain and simmple. you did every thing a good techno song has, and it made me bounce around in my seat alot and now it's stuch in my head....... not sure if thats a good or a bad thing yet....... but yes 100 percent for this you did a wonderfull job

the paper doll

Nice techno, but techno 's about the beat and it's gotta be smooth, there's a little glitch in 0:07 but then the beat continued and I was ready ya!  Nice!

Good techno try!    I think to round it out you might try adding a really full bass sound - maybe come to a full second stop around :50 -  right after the "are you ready" - and come back in with full bass...and keep building it up in increments from there (like maybe adding more layers of drum loops, and some synth).  Imo, the best techno songs are about the build, the ebbs, and flows...you make the listener/dancer anticipate the changes, and almost beg for them - then you give it to them!

You've got a pretty good foundation here. I vote. 

wow this is pretty funky!

kickin techno alright!

though a fat bassline or some arpeggiated synths would greatly add to the experience, this IS really cool!

wowow, impressed! I never found my way with FL Studio myself... but hey.. I feel more inspired now..

kool!


*applauds*



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This song needs better mixing and more progress. Most electronic music constantly changes providing excitement for the dancer. Try to think of it as a story, start from the Intro, into Plot line, move into Climax, and slowly back down. Sometimes with a false ending, use your imagination. Also All electronic songs need GOOOD STRONG basslines, so enjoy.

Nice drum loops....love the use of the voice.

But it really needs some basslines, I think.

u guys make me spin
fruity loops gone mad........... a la linda
love it ........................... jumpin around
i'm a casualty of fl sounds
thanx Linda

the fish

"Smokin' is ba-a-a-a-ad for you"

Nice one NT4M - I've not tried the techno stuff yet but I'd be really pleased if, when I did, it turned out like this.
Yes, an electro-bass sound in there would have added to it nicely.  But this is great stuff Linda.