2 Years on and just about to finish the remastered version

sack the bassist

i smell a hint of cat stevens.....

I like it, but i think there you have deviated too much from a natural sound, i think if the vocals hadn't been distorted perhaps the song would sound a lot better

I like the song! so if it"s about love, life & relationship?    If love is grand! and life and relationship is basicly the same, it has it"s ups & downs. Try that with the back-up vocals. example: sing about love, use the back-up vocals  for your ups and downs. and 1/2 way hearable. like a Rob Halford sound in the back ground,  I"m not going to say sack the bassist, but bring him to life, throw a spot lite & a little style to him.

i think you guys could make your solo sound more hard rock then i think it will sound sweet. But on the other hand this song is still sweet.

Thanks, keep them coming...
Unfotunatly i have no bassist to sack, just me plodding round the fret board trying to get a decent bass line out of it, for some reason i have never taken to playing the bass that well, i will keep practicing.

I dont think im able to change the song now that the contest has started, so i will try to rework the vocal with a little less effects after the battle...

Thanks for the feedback q:)


(Cat Stevens????)

i agree the bassist is terrible.. i can give them lessons if they want.. im currently 15 years old and earning 120 grand per year AUD doing session work in the city. I got no other cradentials tho :P but im teaching 8 people for 40 bux n hour so if u like my rates then message me back aight.. especially if ur serious about your music. Great song btw i like the vocals -hillar

Nice mood, sounds like R.E.M. And I don't know what are thise guys complaining about bassist, he sounds good to me. What I would do maybe is change sound of bass guitar, more treble or something like that.  What you could Improve is sound of solo guitar, bring it to the front of the song... Anyway, nice song...Keep rockin' and good luck!

Not bad at all, might try a clean lead just to see how it sounds but I like it like it is....