#1June 2nd, 2006 · 08:41 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
53 posts
United Kingdom
MrEden
Two Ships
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Two Ships
Can't sing, can't dance, can compose a little. I'm probably a bit past being a pop star now at 41 as my legs long ago ceased to look like Kylie's. I don't really compose this sort of thing any more but it's been cooped up a long time and is due an outing.
#2June 2nd, 2006 · 08:47 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Welcome to the amp!
I liked most of this.  The levels seem to need adjusting, but that could be my crappy speakers.  The harmonies were a nice touch.

I think the vox need a bit of work though...but nobody's perfect    Keep 'em coming! 
#3June 2nd, 2006 · 09:12 PM
160 threads / 33 songs
1,966 posts
United States of America
Great song
This is excellent. the vocals are pretty good, nice harmonies, good groove, I like the  effect in the electric piano sounds. Leslie Effect?  lots of layer in this one YOU GOT SKILLS.
Welcome to band amp. Maybe a little more top end in the vocals,  but that could  just be me and my bad hearing. Welcome to band amp. Maybe I could get you to write some pop songs for my singer  .
#4June 2nd, 2006 · 09:41 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
well, the production quality is tops, no doubt about it... the construction very well done...

but...

there is one minor "but"... :



anyway, we didn't have this sort of thing on the Amp yet, so, well, welcome I suppose

ps. I have rated the song nicely... judged to recording quality and construction... on both accounts excellent jobs... market value however took down the percentage, and sticks to a clean 70%.
#5June 2nd, 2006 · 10:15 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
27 posts
United States of America
well...
Recording is good I'm just not too into it.  Not that everyone has to like every song. sorry
#6June 2nd, 2006 · 10:38 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
929 posts
Netherlands
dont be sorry, its a good thing when one says its not his style but still he respects it for the quality, its a part of this site, compliments and comments, thats the fun

the song:

like Dr.Hook and the Hollies have joined together and call themselve Mr Eden..

imo thats a compliment, cause thy're both good although they arent my fav's
#7June 3rd, 2006 · 07:09 AM
17 threads / 16 songs
81 posts
Philippines
i started to listen in the player , but after 16 bars , i stopped and decided to download it...Good choice , i love the song , the synthes arrangements , the voices , its a great job.For my taste, i will not let the bass occupy the center of the stage , but its a detail.If you compared me to Mike , i have no one to compare you , thats better
#8June 4th, 2006 · 05:53 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
Ah this is nice.

Like a few others, this aint really my thing...

but

it's a nice tune. sounds good. the only critique I have for the sound is the midi instruments... I usually don't like the sound of midi instruments...

mmm... listening again... and I'm starting to get hooked on that chorus...

good work.
#9June 8th, 2006 · 05:03 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
India
nice song...
liked it
#10June 14th, 2006 · 05:08 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Hey, Kylie's legs aren't that good.  OK, she wouldn't be kicked out of bed for eating chips,
but............... oh, hell who am I kidding

Nice sounding retro song, with a touch of Spandau Ballet in there (and yes, Dr Hook too).  Sweet lyrics, perhaps a little too sweet but they go really well with the style of music.

Lovely vocal harmonies

I enjoyed it
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