V1. Down by the road, we kick some stones,
      well it's not too far, just count the stars.
V2. In the tower room, a sonic boom,
      that's way too loud to even make a sound.
Chorus: (and the) Lighthouse station playin' all night long, across the nation they're hummin' along. From Canada over to Hong Kong, a new sensational one hit wonder song.
V3. Down by the sea, we learn to breathe,
      we love to challenge, the balance. - Chorus.
Bridge: and there we are, your peacock charm and my pelican elegance, trying to get at the essence! - Chorus.

wow this is totally awesome! A great tune man! =)

Hahaha!

Well the mix is good, well recorded...but in my opinion the song is a bit boring due to the repetitions of few accords and little variation in way of singing (hope I expressed this in well english).

The bongas? at 2:50 are really cool. Adding some nice vibe to the song.

But...you did well on this song and looking forward to hear more from you.

P.S Welcome to Bandamp!

very true, it's a 2 chord song up until the chorus!!! tee hee! But this was meant to be my simple song cuz sometimes less is more!!! tHANK you for your input and hope to chat with you later!!!

I think I get what you are trying to get across but this is too happy for me,the melody your voice etc.Very well put together just not my personal taste that's all.Good Work

I'll have to agree with everything BasketCase said.

And, yes, this is one of those songs that goes to show, simple can be very good...

And.. I forgot to mention before... Welcome!

yeah this is cool  keep em comming

Ralph

yup...can't disagree with the happy comments already made...but you already know that...its a fun song..extra cheezy

I do think the nature sounds at the intro are a bit much...

The harmonies in the chorus could be a little higher in the mix.

Those are my comments...you know I love it baby!

Paperback writer is a two chord song , simplicity works.
You got an interesting sound ,harmonies etc great going.

Very nice :P

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