This one goes right after "So Peaceful It Hurts" kind of like a calm before the storm type of thing........does need some work.....work in progress......leave some advice and tell me whut you think

The begining reminds me a lot to Slipknot's Pulse of the Maggots... that sirens thing...

The guitar line goes a bit boring without other things to pay attention to.. maybe some drums? cool riffs though.

Cool riffs and all, but it never really goes anywhere. I agree, you should add some drums and maybe another guitar or bass. Oh yeah and maybe some vocals. Then it would be REALLY cool.

-LunchTray

Cool riff, but it can get a bit dull....like most bands today.