Hello, this is just a little piece, it's unfinished, but I would like you to give me some advices to improve it (if it can be done).
I know it's short like all of the songs that I've posted, but I want to make this longer, I've forget the previous songs, I want to start over again.
Bye.

This is a great idea, but you need to make it longer. This have potential; a psychedelic song with some crazy beats... yeah, this could work great, but make it longer.

        > Iszil

great intro....


    Now, Lets add some funky samba beat, and some jungle sounds...
a few spoken word samples.... and you have a hit...

                 

                       Jim "slowhand" K  

good good

good good

I hear a be-bop muted trumpet line a la Dizzy in here. The drum pattern is beboppy enough to support a fast walking bass line and it might sound cool with the surf-noir guitar on top. Can't tell though until there's more of a song .

So I will have to get a good trumpet player, my brother Dodosito is a great bass-player, so he could help me with the bass.
I guess that this will develop into a progressive/surf song, with the samples and everything else.
I'll post it when the changes be done.

The unique rhythm caught my ear big time.  I love the feedback.  If you back off the volume of the main guitar riff just a tad, I think the texture of the song will come through really well.
I listened 4 times. can't wait to hear the rest.  Tube ride? Floater? Hang ten? What will the alien cowboy surfer do? cheers

Nice Atmosphere Down here.......

     

i think it'll be nicer if it goes a little bit longer.....

   Good job

An introduction to bigger and better things no doubt!!!

Not really sure what to suggest for making it longer - this is your music, and your style, so it's very hard to comment on what should come next!

A good start.