This i an arranged version of the old guitar version of Rayz - "Here I Am"...
Help me to win the battle guys...=)

...Peace...

Lyrics :

It's Over
My love for you
Has gone away
Gone away
Flying with the wind

Feel so sad
My heart is broken in million pieces
Now I'm here
Wondering where you are

Now you're gone
You're gone away
Away from me and
You're not coming back

Here i Am
Standing Here
Waiting for you
To comeback in my life
Can't hold it
This feeling in my heart
You're the one I need

If only
You comeback in my life
I promise I won't let you down or sad
But baby
If you're not coming back
One thing you should know

That
Here i Am
Standing Here
Waiting for you
To comeback in my life
Can't hold it
This feeling in my heart
You're the one I need

Too much reverb on the vocals?

Really nice arrangements. Like the strings.  With drier vocals this could be great.

Have to agree with Aetheris on everything he says. The reverb gives it a nice feel but is a bit overdone.

I'd prefer a better ending- a bit abrupt as it is.

Good song though.

I think this has got a real Crowded House sort of sound, don't know if that's what you were going for but if it was, then nice one, I like crowded house. Yeah, I agree with above about vocals.

i agree about the reverb but a nice song. Fits together nicely

well... i guess everything has been said..
not my kinda music... probably a great song.. but i hate the lyrics..
too damn cliche...
sorry if i offend u, but i'm sure i've heard or read the same lyrics in a million other songs
musically splendid!

If anybody here complains about poor arrangement & over-Reverb, You guys should all blame on me..... i play in all parts of Mr.Rayz Music. Haha

Indeed it was too much reverb inside the song.

I ain't got any decent monitoring yet , so- it's difficult for me to get on proper frequencies right when mixing down a song.

   

(Revision)++ : I ain't got any decent monitoring speakers yet.....

so- it's difficult for me to get on proper frequencies right when mixing down a song.


     

heh... you did it...
uuummmm... cool
vox need work.
nice arrangement though

hey bro's...first of all i would like to welcome my man, Ancient...WELCOME to BandAmp.com bro!

yup2...this is one of Ancients work...he's all that...he made all the arrangements...all i do is write and sing...

enjoy...=)