Hello people i just found out aboute this site its verry nice.
There is nothing like just creating youre own music or playing music.
I learned to play the guitar for 1 and a half year, aboute 2 years ago and then stopped playing then till now when i picked up the guitar again to learn without taking lesons. This recording goes back 2 and a half year ago when i learned to play the guitar (1 year of taking lessons). The drummer was a beginner too and was looking for someone to jam with so we jamed then. The ritem play is verry simple, but i needed to put something on here. The recording is not profesional like some of yours, its just an mp3 stick with a mic that i put somewhere in the room. Its a ritem i made up when we where jamming, hope you people like it. Like to hear some feedback if you like.

lets be honest; i don't now whats worse, your recording or your English
But your playing isn't that bad i believe to hear through all the distortion.
maybe some changes to the chords would be nice, and of course some melody, a break and it might even become a song instead of a jam
Keep on practicing and experimenting!
and of course keep listening to all the masters from this site

By the way, you know this site has a spellcheck?

It's kind of an 80's punk sound... Fairly original.. though...  I agree about the distortion.. hard to make out some of the riffs, but it does have a good overall appearance of a decent song... I think it would not be too difficult to get something better out of it..
     Can't wait to hear some more...  Come on!!  get recording!! 
                                      JimK

let´s see,

this song is very punk in the way of does not matter if you got background theory.

In fact, my first band sounds like this. I recommend you follow the advices of the others in this site.

try new scales, change the volume and tunes, get more pedals

Your style is alright, the chord progression is worn out....
get a better mic,


Keep practising kid 

so you have some ideas for a song here. try to develope them and then we'll see.

Thx for your feedback people
I am not interested in making a song it just the fun of creating music for me .
I haven't got good recording equipment but i am planing to buy a drum machine, we'll see what that brings.
I will try to record a different version of playing this rhythm, after 2,5 years of not playing but i will try it. (without drums just the guitar play)
i will record it with a PC mic so i hope it goes well.
And ok sry about the english but you all understand what i was meaning to say.
but thx everybody.