OK, This is the last one I'll put up for a while. I fear I'm pissing people off :P I'm gunna concentrate on commenting on more people's work. I've just been so busy.

VERSE 1

Oh shit,
Guess I got the wrong end of the stick,
I guess you thought your magic tricks would,
Fool me more than this.

But I thought you'd know,
I'm just too old for magic shows

CHORUS

Well I guess I'm gunna go,
I hope you hold onto your pride,
'Cause it won't be long,
'Till the weight of your wrong,
Leaves it the only thing in your life.

Well I know it hurts now baby,
But you just gotta let it slide.

VERSE 2

Oh fuck,
Seems you'ce really screwed things up,
Or didn't I squint hard enough,
To keep you in my view?

And you,
Flew.

Nevermind.

CHORUS

Well I guess I'm gunna go,
I hope you hold onto your pride,
'Cause it won't be long,
'Till the weight of your wrong,
Leaves it the only thing in your life.

Well I know it hurts now baby,
But you just gotta let it slide.

Oh, Shit!
Guess I love this song.
Come on man, just one bad song, please!
You are an incredible composer and what I liked more of this song were the expressions you used in your voice, which, for me, is the best here on BandAMP. The chords progression, as in all your songs, is really good, and in general all is awesome.
I'll buy your album when you release it. This is a great job.
Huge fan of yours.

      > Iszil

you have a very sensual voice,i am liking this song....wow....

Very nice style. The guitar strumming and picking pattern works really well together. And your voice, once again, is fabulous.

100% from me - you have the art of expressing your song in your voice.

but yur gonna have to use "Dear Brit" and "Hey Chuck" in the radio edit 

Yes. Oh, Shit.
Nice sound quality.
What's your recorder?
What was your mic?
Looking forward to new stuff on your new guitar.

like all the rest of your work ..very impressive
 

Very well done - it has real emotion, or at least a good imitation of it.

Great composition and tecnique.
The vocals are also great.
very well done!

Hats off to you!  This is definitely one of the best songs up here.  The guitar work is clean, the vocals are clear and tasteful... everything fits really nicely.  Rock!!

Marg
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