Hey PX, nice job.

I like this one alot better and I'm not sure why. Pbly cuz the other one sounds, I dunno, dated. Like a Lena Lovich song updated to the early nineties. this version is up to date and more , hm.. desperate... emotionally charged.

you have a loose vocal style. Some people can get away with that. If I try it, it sounds wretched. With you it seems to sound natural. That said, I'd like to hear the bg vox more precise , maybe with the original female vocalist , and the lead stay the way it is. that , I think , would be cool.