#1November 14th, 2005 · 05:39 PM
10 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Belgium
cindercloudmusic
Last breath
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Last breath
It's a short acoustic song no lyrics and I think I'll never put lyrics on it but I'm not sure yet so if you would like to give me some advice. We think it can be an intro of a CD. The quality is maybe not so good but we do not have the material sorry for that. Please give your opinion so maybe we can make something of this song
#2November 14th, 2005 · 07:40 PM
13 threads / 1 songs
408 posts
United States of America
I really like the chord progression. As far as recording quality, plugging your guitar into a preamp then plugging the preamp into the computer will really help out with the noise. Hope you develop it more and maybe add lyrics.
#3November 15th, 2005 · 06:44 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
United States of America
Relaxing and enjoyable, but not "hooky" enough to stand alone - This reminds me of "Bookends" by Simon and Garfunkel - a nice filler or intro track on an album to break up other tracks and adjust the pacing of the album. The arpeggiation and progression are beautiful.

I bet you can get the recording quality up with the equipment you have, but not knowing what that is I hesitate to make specific suggestions.
#4November 15th, 2005 · 07:10 PM
15 threads / 14 songs
56 posts
Latvia
I think the soun is too dirty for this kind of music...record it one more time...song is ok.
#5November 15th, 2005 · 08:01 PM
31 threads / 1 songs
434 posts
United States of America
needs work - a lot of work

tune the guitar
fix the recording quality
get the rhythm tighter
make it... mmm... not so boring?

sorry - but aside from that it sound homogenously "nice" I don't have much to say about this song
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