A happy go lucky song. The first one I ever wrote long time back, something like 5 years ago.

Lyrics:

Across the street I saw a girl,
She was walking away without a care in the world,
She called out to me can you help me please,
I have a thorn in paw I need to release.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
Across the street some day.

In a warm afternoon under hot sunshine
I could feel the sweat on her blurred outline,
She had a car which had broken down,
on the outskirts of an unknown town.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
Asking me for a lift in my car.

Inside the pub in the dim light,
I could see her face oh was it a sight,
With her blue eyes and her pretty black hair,
I could swear to god I could forever stare.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
In a pub having a drink.

Parties bands stocking and shoes,
Saturday nights and Monday blues,
It was she who said that we should leave the best,
Till the late hours of the night (till the late hours of the night)
I got to confess I hope tho meet the girl of my dreams,
I my dreams tonight (in my dreams tonight).

Wow this sounds cool !

I'm not usually into this kind of music... but this is really good! Some drums may be nice though..

brings a    to my face!

A nice light song. I like the way the bass line steps around to compliment the guitar.
I think this would work well within a band.

Interstingly while everyone likes the song the rating is a woeful 50%

you cut off the end of some words...make the complete motion of the word with your mouth not just the general noise...the song would be better

Hey Songwriter, it's my personal opinion that ratings should have more to do with quality and performance rather than "liking" a song. I can say I like a lot of songs on bandamp but I find them hard to listen to bc of quality of sound and an "off" performance. That being said, you've got a good song. There are a lot of songs on bandamp that I don't "like" but when quality and performance are great, I try to be as objective as possible bc it is their expression. And that is the whole gray area of art, right? Well, that's my philosophy on rating music here.

hmmm.....

it should be rated on how the song makes you feel, not on crummy quality etc etc. wahtever, i tihnk its a good song

Thanks