Wow......wow.....whoah.  That was amazing.  I'm not a lyrics person, but I loved these.  And the guitar fit perfectly with them - loving the harmonics that you don't get to hear too often nowa days.  In terms of quality, I actually think it suits it the way it is right now.  Just re-record the vocals so they don't peak too much, and maybe in one or two places fix the guitar peaking but other than that I think the 'not-perfect' style fits brilliantly.

Amazing song - 90% just cos of the peaking.