Haha, maybe no cookies from pap yet, but I'm loving those effects on the guitar.  What effect you using to get that gated kinda sound?  I still dunno how to use that.  I think what would really add power to this is if you spent a little more time looking through the drums available.  Maybe in places more layers of audio too...but also keep in mind that that is comign from a guy who has about 25 instruments playing by the 1 minute mark in his FL songs haha.  Good job tho - if this is your first attempt its impressive!