well feedbak huh?

lol

this is not the beatles  no... however.. that chorus part.. well, ... and yes, it does remind me of radiohead also.

I like the verses... the chorus changes the mood suddenly, that's good, and when it transforms to the wilder part... also well thought of really...
 
but, yeah, the mix is pretty off ... drums are too dry, voice sound too remote, in fact all instrumentals could use more life, more colour, more... more boost, spunk, presence... more "in your face"ness sort of like. it could use some more filling (perhaps with stereo modulation effects to the parts) to create a fuller soundscape. and a more interesting drum part yeah....

but the construction in all, is definately very interesting... strangely good... very musical... you should try to get to talk to voltstupor (when his internet is back up I think he'll really dig this style)

cheerss....

ps. voting "very good" despite the not so good mixing job/drum track ... heyhey