I wrote the main comment on the first version but now again, comparing JimKs and the Final version.

Nice that you tuned down the guitar a little, it was a little bit to much in Jims version but now its perfect for the 'late-at-night'-feeling.
Nice blast in 3:07, i love accents like that.
Sometimes its kinda out-of-key (is that actually possible in dub music ^^) which is not too bad but sounds kinda ... strange.

Nice relaxed song. I'm gonna download it and play it at parties

Keep up the good stuff !