There's a lot of potential here!  Needs some work though...the rhythm guitar sounds slightly out of tune...and the vox go out of tune in quite a few places...

I like the piano as well...maybe it just needs to be eq'd better....the overall constructions of the song is quite good...the changes etc...vocals need to be more forward in the mix....maybe you could use a more consistent drum pattern as well..I'd like to hear more beats through-out...

Keep it up!  Can't wait to hear some more